My Uncomfortable Day (a poem)

28 Dec

My uncomfortable day,

Begins with a

Early wake up in the morning,

And a sleepy head.

Brushing and having breakfast,

And rushing to the bus stop

Missed the bus,

Had to walk a long way.


My uncomfortable day,

Ends with a

Tired face coming by bus,

Walking to my home,

With tired legs,

And a heavy bag,

And a lazy head,

My uncomfortable day,

Ends uncomfortably.

– Krishal Dhamala, Class 4H, GEMS.


2 Responses to “My Uncomfortable Day (a poem)”

  1. atit December 29, 2011 at 2:43 pm #

    the best part was when the poem says………. my uncomfortable day ends uncomfortably

    • Shahibya Thapa December 30, 2011 at 3:29 pm #

      Ya this poem is really nice

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